Leaving mother earth
Ramon Parica Jr.
Take me for i have no reasons to stay
hold me for i don’t know if i could calm
the storm inside me
Adhere to me for i never thought
that the vileness grows in me
Be my providence for i shall
be resurrected to inhibit
your orders
-May 30, 2010
I thought at one time that the storm within was something that should be there…and I grew to know it as my passion for the elements of my life…it was the force that guided the words of the poems….enjoyed the thoughts your poem conveyed and the ones started within me.
thanks for that comment. we’ll as you can see i’m just a newbee up here and i’m not that good in poems..
Story of my life